some people think all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many people feel that university members ought to gain knowledge the way they want,
while
others tend to think that student's curriculum should include only beneficial subjects
(like science and technology), which support them in the future. This
essay discusses both sides of this
argument and then
I will give my own perspective.
There are merits of freedom
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the freedom
education
process in universities. If Change preposition
of education
yong
people Correct your spelling
young
will be
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are
tought
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taught
tough
subjects
they want it could save their
time for their other activities Correct pronoun usage
them
such
as sport
, social life and reading books. Fix the agreement mistake
sports
As well as
this
, students less
likely to Add a missing verb
are less
lost
their desire to continue Change the form of the verb
lose
acquire
knowledge in the particular university. To illustrate, some recent TV Wrong verb form
acquiring
program
demonstrated Fix the agreement mistake
programs
benefits
that can bring from Correct article usage
the benefits
open
curriculum in universities. It is concerned that Correct article usage
an open
freedom
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the freedom
studying
process can help to avoid problems related Change preposition
of studying
with
low marks in Change preposition
to
partitucal
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particular
subjects
.
However
, there are also
advantages to study
traditional Wrong verb form
studying
subjects
such
as science and technology. First of all, students who get knowledge about these subjects
can easily find apropriate
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appropriate
job
for their bright future. By teaching science and technology they might become a very competitive employee and bring well-paid Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
job
. It is Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
clearly
that these Change the word
clear
kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
subjects
are main
part of important professions like Add an article
the main
a main
engineer
, Wrong verb form
engineering
scientists
, Replace the word
science
creator
and so on.
In conclusion, I believe both sides of the notion have their merits. On balance, Replace the word
creation
however
, it is seems
that Change the verb form
seems
traditional
education process in the university should consist Correct article usage
the traditional
all
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of all
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the necessery
necessery
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necessary
subjects
, which aid them to build
good Change preposition
in building
career
. Fix the agreement mistake
careers
This
is because students may not know what they want clearly and choose their subjects
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