some people think all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people feel that university members ought to gain knowledge the way they want,

while

others tend to think that student's curriculum should include only beneficial

subjects

(like science and technology), which support them in the future.

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essay discusses both sides of

this

argument and

then

I will give my own perspective. There are merits of

freedom

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education

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process in universities. If

yong

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young

people

will be

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tought

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taught

tough

subjects

they want it could save

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time for their other activities

such

as

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, social life and reading books.

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this

, students

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likely to

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their desire to continue

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knowledge in the particular university. To illustrate, some recent TV

program

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demonstrated

benefits

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that can bring from

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curriculum in universities. It is concerned that

freedom

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studying

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process can help to avoid problems related

with

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low marks in

partitucal

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particular

subjects

.

However

, there are

also

advantages to

study

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traditional

subjects

such

as science and technology. First of all, students who get knowledge about these

subjects

can easily find

apropriate

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appropriate

job

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for their bright future. By teaching science and technology they might become a very competitive employee and bring well-paid

job

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. It is

clearly

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that these

kind

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of

subjects

are

main

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part of important professions like

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,

scientists

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,

creator

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and so on. In conclusion, I believe both sides of the notion have their merits. On balance,

however

, it

is seems

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that

traditional

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education process in the university should consist

all

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the necessery

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necessery

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necessary

subjects

, which aid them

to build

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good

career

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.

This

is because students may not know what they want clearly and choose their

subjects

incorrectly.