It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is a highly controversial issue that some people are genetically equipped with some gifted abilities,

such

as a skilled musician or athlete, while others have to acquire those abilities through conventional methods of learning as well as challenging work. In my opinion, both statements convince me of some reasons,

nevertheless

, I am more inclined to prefer the statement that

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success in a particular profession can be achieved due to the unstoppable effort and extend my partial support for the latter view. On

one

side of the argument, having a unique

talent

greatly contributes to

one

’s success.

The talented

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people have huge advantages as compared to the non-gifted

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.

As a result

,

one

is born with an inherent

talent

he does not need to work hard to exhibit his skills.

One

good illustration of

this

is Pele, who is considered as the legendary

soccer

player

from an early age, thanks to

his

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genes that he inherited from his father- a talented

soccer

player

in Brazil.

On the other hand

, the untalented person can acquire some skills that enable them to excel in an occupation as similar as the innate person if they have passion and ambitious personality traits. Cristian Ronaldo, who is known as the most successful

soccer

player

in recent times, is a precise instance of extreme effort. He was born in poverty, but, thanks to his extreme effort, he is a popular

soccer

player

in the world and

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the wall of fame in

soccer

. A hard-working person probably receives an outstanding result because practice makes perfect. To conclude, innate

talent

and hard work are not mutually exclusive. On balance, I hold a strong belief that gifted

talent

and training are the best

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to achieve admirable results