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Nowadays people are working too hard. What is the reason for that? What should employers do in order to prevent employees from this?

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In the present time, long hours of hard work is increasing between employees, due to economic problems. Tom avoid its adverse effects, business owners and managers must take
preventing
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 tactics to help their staff for keeping
work-life
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 balance. Reasons behind
this
 decision to work harder than a normal routine could be
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 person to person. Not only higher inflation and expenses of life force people to work harder, the consumerism and our
contemporate
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contemporary
 lifestyle
also
 make it inevitable.
Moreover
, employers are worsting
this
 situation by expanding
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 duties of their experienced staff, which can put serious physical or mental pressure on them. To avoid
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 effects of
this
 improving strain on employees, human resource managers suggest adding some physical exercise
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 their daily schedule. It is
also
 crucial to promote
salary
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 and position of experienced employees along with expanding their responsibilities. Interestingly, knowledge in managing human resources
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 developing dramatically. In my opinion, it is extremely beneficial for every single company to utilize their experience for better management. In conclusion, increasing expenditures and changes
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 our lifestyle are two key points that stimulate more working. It could be problematic in
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 long run and businesses must take appropriate actions to avoid
this
 situation.
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