The charts below show the what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008
The assigned bar graphs illustrate the comparison of students of UK graduates and postgraduates excluding full-time work in 2008. A cursory glance at the chart is enough to make it clear that the range of individuals continuing their post-education was maximum in the given time period.
Talking about children undergoing graduation, the highest number of learners were 29665 doing a higher study
while
excluding complete working hours. However
, 3500 trainees were engaged as a volunteer which was the minimum frequency which was followed by 17775 were
performing part-time jobs and 16235 adults were unemployed.
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having the look at postgraduate college children, the excessive amount of youngsters continuing their study were
2725 , followed by extra time workers at nearly 2535 in number Correct subject-verb agreement
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1625 were jobless and 345 pupils were unpaid employers.
Overall
,it is clear that
the least figure of UK students was engaged in voluntary workSubmitted by rajbir.venus on
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