It is now possible to order almost any item over the Internet and have it delivered to one’s home. As a result, people are no longer patient or careful in their shopping habits. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Online shopping and home delivery

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concerns that consumers may become

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and less cautious.

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, I do not believe that online shopping has

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effect. In fact, I would say that the opposite is true. In

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essay, I will discuss the reasons that online shopping actually helps shoppers make smarter choices. Internet shopping actually makes people more patient while they shop, not less patient.

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is because, even with home delivery, online shopping is actually less “instant” than traditional shopping in stores. After all, if someone goes into a store, they can leave minutes later with the items they purchased.

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, even the fastest delivery methods for online goods take at least a day.

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, people are actually more accustomed to longer waits before they receive something they’ve bought. Not only does online shopping make buyers more patient

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facilitates careful, informed choices for buyers.

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is because there is more competition between different sellers online than there is in a single store. If someone goes to a store in person, they will see a relatively small range of brand names, and they certainly won’t see the offerings of other stores.

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, online

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can compare just about every brand of any given product and browse the websites of multiple stores.

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all the information they need to make the best possible purchases. When shopping on the Web,

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can learn patience because they must wait for their items to be delivered to them, and even more importantly,

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can access all of the information they need to choose the right items. Ultimately, online shopping is truly a positive development, not a negative one.

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impulsive
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physical interaction
careful consideration
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