It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about other cultures of people. We can learn just as much from books, films and the internet. Do you agree or disagree?
Most
people
today believed that other peoples
Change noun form
people's
culture
can be cultivated from the ideas on social media and the press Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
instead
of traveling
to places. Change the spelling
travelling
However
, some people
think otherwise
. This
essay will state my own viewpoint on the topic.
For the first
group of people
, I disagree with their opinion that it is not important to travel to distant countries before we can learn their habits. Unfortunately, we cannot believe everything we read or see in movies as some vital informations
may be missing. Asides Change the wording
information
pieces of information
this
, wrong ideas may be portrayed in films or journals. But personally, I think seeing is believing. Change preposition
from this
For example
, food, which is also
part of other people
's culture cannot be savoured by just watching a television program or just by reading a book. In this
case, traveling
may be necessary to enjoy other Change the spelling
travelling
people
's delicacy.
The second
viewpoint brings us to the importance of traveling
. Looking at Change the spelling
travelling
this
from
my opinion, Change preposition
in
traveling
will definitely cost more expenses. Change the spelling
travelling
For instance
, if we're considering to
travel to a foreign land, the expenditure Change preposition
apply
need
to be calculated ahead in order to avoid being stranded. The length of days to spend, hotel, feeding, buying gifts and tourism, all these needs Change the verb form
needs
proper
planning before embarking on a journey. As no one will start to build a house before calculating the expenses.
In summary, both views are right, Add an article
a proper
however
, an interstate visiting
can be done so as to enjoy other Replace the word
visit
people
's culture. Moreover
, this
will promote peace and unity within the country.Submitted by Jaeltopsy on
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