Some people say that protecting the environment is the government's responsibility. Other believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Some would argue that it's the nation's work to preserve the environment,

while

others say each of the citizens has to work for its protection. I believe

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the government is a crucial part in settling environmental issues because one has to compulsorily follow its rules and

regulation

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Whereas

, each individual being responsible is important as they are the first who gets directly affected if changes in the surroundings occur. The nation is always responsible

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the eco-system because it has the right to formulate the constitution that everyone has to follow.

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punishment is in its hands if anyone is found doing illegal with the surroundings

such

as cutting down trees, animal poaching, throwing garbage in an unmanaged way, etc. To cite an example, a man got life imprisonment

due to

illegally selling a Rhinocerous horn in an international market.

Therefore

, I believe the ministry has

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responsibility

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the habitat as its legislation

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equally applicable to all living citizens.

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, the surrounding is a home for all human beings and its disturbances cause direct hampers to all. Many kinds of diseases, natural calamities and global warming not only

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but

also

can take one's life. To illustrate,

due to

continuous deforestation, the flood has taken many lives and distorted houses in the Sindhupalchowk district of Nepal

last

year.

However

, I believe not only good people but

also

bad, selfish people are there who can hamper the setting so the

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decision only can stop them from doing wrong. In conclusion, the government have high power as it can take strict control over the climate by setting boundaries.

Also

, each individual has equal responsibilities still, negligence could occur where the code plays a vital role to protect it.