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Not enough students around the world choose to study science subjects at university. what are the reasons for this? what impact does this issue have on society?

#students #world #study #science #subjects #university #impact #society
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Nowadays,
students
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 decide to study
subjects
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such
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 as
law
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, literature and economics rather than
science
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subjects
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.
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 essay will analyse the are two main reasons why
students
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 are not choosing to deepen their knowledge of
science
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 and the consequences that
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 issue has on society.
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 of all,
students
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 do not pick
science
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 classes at University, because these are considered to be more complicated and demanding than others,
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 as art or literature.
Furthermore
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, people tend to consider some career paths more satisfying and fulfilling than others.
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, it is commonly believed that pursuing a career in
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Law
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the Law
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 of Finance is more appealing than working as a scientist. The direct consequence of
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 trend is that there is a lack of professionals in the scientific field.
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 situation can only get worse because there will be a growing need for scientists in the
next
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 years due to climate change challenges.
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, there are too many university graduates that chose to specialise in overpopulated fields and that will hardly find a job.
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, in
Italy
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,Italy
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 we have a surplus of
law
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 and economics graduates, while we lack graduates in physics or biology. To conclude, young people all over the world prefer to dedicate themselves to
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 economics or
law
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, leaving behind
science
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subjects
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.
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 is due to the fact that
science
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subjects
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 are argued to be tougher
that
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than
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 others and not very promising in terms of career opportunities.
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, since not enough
students
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 are specialising in
science
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, society lacks professionals in relevant areas, while other professional fields are overpopulated.
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