Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now "one big traffic jam". How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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number of

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being owned, a space on the road becomes smaller and smaller. In my opinion, it is undoubtedly true. In

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by a government.

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as a comfortable way of transport.

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needs to be introduced to the public

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alternatives to the

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to be done. The encouragements from the side of the governments will be the best way to discourage

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from driving by

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car. In the future, with the variants which have been proposed in

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which make no moves for hours.

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