Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now "one big traffic jam". How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

With each year more and

more

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people buy

cars

so that there are big traffic jams all over the world. With

increasing

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number of

cars

being owned, a space on the road becomes smaller and smaller. In my opinion, it is undoubtedly true. In

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essay, I will prove that

this

opinion is right and give examples of the probable ways of solving

this

problem

by a government.

Firstly

, over the

last

period of thirty

years

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people have accustomed to using

cars

as a comfortable way of transport.

As a result

,the selling of

this

type of transport is constantly rising.

Thus

, in big cities, there are always traffic jams which could

last

for hours.

For instance

, in an enormous city like London, you can hardly go home after work without long traffics. And it is not just about London. New York, Paris, Berlin

ect

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etc

.

also

suffer from

this

issue.

Thus

it is clear that the whole world has come across

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this

problem

.

Secondly

, governments

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to be involved in dealing with

this

problem

and some

measurements

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are needed to be taken. The idea of

this

problem

needs to be introduced to the public

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though

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the media and TV.

Then

,

government

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should give

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alternatives to the

cars

such

as bicycles and electronic scooters. These measures surely will give the wanted results of reducing the amount of using

this

tipe

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type

of transport. To sum up, nowadays

cars

have filled the whole planet and something

is definitely has

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to be done. The encouragements from the side of the governments will be the best way to discourage

public

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from driving by

a

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car. In the future, with the variants which have been proposed in

this

essay, the situation will definitely change and we won't see anymore a big line of

cars

which make no moves for hours.