nowadays, many schools find it profitable to sell unhealthy food and sugary drinks to students during lunch breaks. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?

Many public schools find that they are inadequately funded by the government and must resort to other ways of raising money. Selling

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provides a source of revenue as well as a service to

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but, in my view, the sale of junk

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and soft drinks or ‘energy’ drinks is a worrying development. Some people would argue that it is merely a matter of choice. They believe

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can make an informed decision about whether to eat and drink products loaded with calories and excess sugar and that, indeed, there are times when

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might need an extra energy boost or feel they deserve a sweet treat. Others feel that school

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do not yet have the maturity to curb the impulse to buy unhealthy

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and may be subject to peer pressure to do so. There are already too

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opportunities for youngsters to purchase

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elsewhere, so putting temptation in their way of selling it at school is unacceptable. Those who do not support sales of sugary snacks and beverages say that consumption of these items have adverse long-term effects (diabetes and dental decay,

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immediate effects on the learning environment. Children are often hyperactive and overexcited after consuming excessive amounts of sugar, making it difficult for them to concentrate on their studies. A local school in my area removed these items from the shop

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and found an immediate improvement in student concentration and behaviour.

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it may be less profitable, surely schools could be persuaded to sell more fruit and nourishing snacks in the interests of a healthier population. It is their role to educate young people about the benefits of a wholesome and balanced diet, not to endorse the consumption of unhealthy, calorie-rich, low-nutrition

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and drinks.