Your share your room with another student in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has parties and friends visiting. Write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the room mate.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to bring your attention to the problems I am facing in your hostel room. I have been living in room101 on the ground floor.

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month a new student came to share the space with me but he is disturbing me a lot.

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with, he organises parties every alternative day.

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, I thought it would end in a few days but it is increasing day by day.

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, all his friends are outsiders which is against the policy of the hostel.

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, they speak

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language which creates an awkward situation for me.

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, they create a lot of disturbance with loud music. I would appreciate it if you a lot a new room for me and take strict action against them. If you don't take any action, I have to leave the place immediately. My exams are

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and I cannot take any risk. I hope you will solve my problem. I would be thankful to you. Best regards, Aman

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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169 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

hostel warden
cohabitation
disruptive behavior
communal living
academic performance
conducive to studying
nocturnal activities
amicable resolution
accommodation request
policy enforcement
distraction
sleep deprivation
noise level
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Your share your room with another student in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has parties and friends visiting. Write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the room mate.

“In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common.” Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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