You ordered an item from an online shopping store and it has arrived damaged. Write a letter to the retailer to complain. In your letter: • Explain why you are unhappy • Request a refund • Make arrangements to return the damaged item

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to draw your attention to the poor quality packing of the blender I order. I had placed an online item but the glass material was cracked. My serial number was MX6549 and I ordered it on 20 March. I am very disappointed because I wanted to gift

this

to my friend at her wedding which has now passed.

Moreover

, I expected the article to be packed tightly with material that could protect the glass but when I opened the box I was shocked. I was very confused and had to arrange another gift for my friend on the spot.

Therefore

, I would appreciate it if you make a 100% refund to me as

this

was not my mistake.

Further

, I would be thankful if you make

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appropriate arrangements to returning of the item. I hope you will solve my problem. Best Regards, Aman

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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1Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

151 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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Topic Vocabulary:

I am writing to express my disappointment
I regret to inform you that
I am dissatisfied with the item I received
The item arrived damaged
The product is in unsatisfactory condition
I expected better quality
I would like to request a refund
I kindly ask for your assistance in resolving this matter
I would appreciate it if you could provide instructions
I suggest arranging a pick-up service
I expect a prompt response and resolution
I hope for a satisfactory outcome

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