You ordered an item from an online shopping store and it has arrived damaged. Write a letter to the retailer to complain. In your letter: • Explain why you are unhappy • Request a refund • Make arrangements to return the damaged item

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to draw your attention to the poor quality packing of the blender I order. I had placed an online item but the glass material was cracked. My serial number was MX6549 and I ordered it on 20 March. I am very disappointed because I wanted to gift

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to my friend at her wedding which has now passed.

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, I expected the article to be packed tightly with material that could protect the glass but when I opened the box I was shocked. I was very confused and had to arrange another gift for my friend on the spot.

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, I would appreciate it if you make a 100% refund to me as

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was not my mistake.

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, I would be thankful if you make

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appropriate arrangements to returning of the item. I hope you will solve my problem. Best Regards, Aman

jogdeep8454Mon Mar 21 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

151 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

I am writing to express my disappointment
I regret to inform you that
I am dissatisfied with the item I received
The item arrived damaged
The product is in unsatisfactory condition
I expected better quality
I would like to request a refund
I kindly ask for your assistance in resolving this matter
I would appreciate it if you could provide instructions
I suggest arranging a pick-up service
I expect a prompt response and resolution
I hope for a satisfactory outcome

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You ordered an item from an online shopping store and it has arrived damaged. Write a letter to the retailer to complain. In your letter: • Explain why you are unhappy • Request a refund • Make arrangements to return the damaged item

* In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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