5. Some people think the government should ban dangerous sports, while some others think everyone should be free to choose whatever sporting activities he or she likes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is true that some

sports

are too dangerous to establish in our

life

.

Therefore

, while some people want the

government

to ban those kinds of

sports

, others think they have

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rights

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to choose what

sports

they like. Supporters of the

first

viewpoint contend that they should have the freedom to play every sport that they like. In fact, it cannot be denied that each sport has its features

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are neither beneficial nor disadvantageous.

For instance

, the motorbike racing competitors bring exciting feelings to

players

that encourage them to win the game.

Hence

, if the

government

bans those

sports

, it may reduce the variety of choices in entertainment activities.

Additionally

, some

players

spend a majority of their

life

practicing

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those competitions that could be the main income.

However

, due to the level of some dangerous

sports

such

as motorbike racing, the

government

should start

to

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not allow people to play those

sports

. The

first

reason is the negative effect of injuries which may extend to the whole

life

. If a player got damaged like a broken leg or

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in a match or race, He could become

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disabled in his whole

life

.

In addition

, the operation might get

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fine or imprisonment if any

players

have an accident while playing dangerous

sports

. Some news is reported about the bankruptcy of firms that established those

sports

in the past. In my opinion, playing dangerous

sports

is

also

too risky for

players

and viewers. The consequences of getting injuries overweigh the interesting feeling while playing those kinds of

sports

. In conclusion,

although

dangerous

sports

can bring

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enjoyable emotion to

players

and viewers,

it

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might cause many negative effects to people.

Therefore

, in my view, the

government

should ban dangerous

sports

overtime.