Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Government spend

money

on different fields to improve economic growth and societal well-being. Even

arts

are among the many investments that governments make. It

is disagreed

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that governments must invest

money

in

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pubic

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public

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services

instead

of in

arts

. Analyzing the significance of boosting the country’s soft power by investing in the

arts

, as well as the great emotional pleasure that

arts

may bring to people will prove

this

.

Firstly

,

arts

such

as music and theatre represent the soft power of a nation.

For instance

, it is widely known that countries that hold Olympic

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are well known

by

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all over the world because they present unique design and imagination through the participation of numerous artists who make

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a collaborative

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effort

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efforts

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to implement

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and closing

ceremony

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of

this

event.

Therefore

,

this

makes it clear that the

money

invested in

arts

will never be wasted.

Secondly

, governments should not invest solely in public services and spend no

money

in

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arts

. The reason is that

arts

bring great benefit to people’s mental ease and will release their anxiety and stress accumulated from long working hours.

For example

, going to a concert or watching a movie is the best choice

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weekend

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which will definitely cheer up people’s mood.

Thus

it becomes apparent that

government’s

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money

spent

in

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the

arts

is absolutely worthwhile. To summarize,

government

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should invest in the

arts

.

Therefore

, it is clear that the idea of spending

money

only

in

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public services can not be supported. After thorough analysis on

this

subject, investment in the

arts

is always beneficial to the nation, and because of

this

,

money

spent will never be wasted.