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Because of the busy pace of a modern life children's spend most of their time indoor and have little exposure to the natural word. How important is it for children to learn to understand and appreciate nature

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spending much of the time at their homes majority of juveniles are having less contact with the environment in
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 appropriate by nature. documents with common there are many of reason why the
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 to nature.
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 have a low bone density. So,
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environment
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 hand, as the
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 boost their confidence. So that they don't have any fair to explain any topic as well as they become expound. I think so they become more beneficial for their communication skills. in
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both vantage points would retreat that
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