the best way to reduce the number of traffic accident is to make all young driver complete a safe driving course before being licensed to drive

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due to
advancement
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of technology
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way
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of travelling has become more convenient and easy. Prior to being a licence to drive young ones must opt
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for course
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course
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courses
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related to driving to decrease
count
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the count
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of
traffic
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accidents. I will show
above
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notion. mandatory driving courses are beneficial for youth. After
learn
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the driving classes it helps to understand
rules
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and
regulation
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regulations
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of specific
nation
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nations
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of
traffic
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and driving. All over, they will not acetate and nervous during driving.
To
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individual should know about all the
rules
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and regulation of the
road
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such
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as science symbols and do not use the mobile while driving. The vehicle
then
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after
come
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on the
road
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.
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the
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result, safe driving
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, as well as know all about the rules,
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know
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all about the
rules
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eventually lead to less count of accidents. Another possible
way
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for reduction of injuries due to
traffic
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collision
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collisions
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.
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the
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apply
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road
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maintenance is the best
way
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to reduce the accidents
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such
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apply
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as a
road
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condition
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conditions
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should be maintained properly as well as the roads signs are available in
proper
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the proper
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place and speed
breaker
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too.
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, constructing
one
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way
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road
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. to illustrate,
developed
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in developed
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countries, there are proper
rules
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and
regulation
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regulations
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like camera
survenilleude
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surveilled
, digital number plate
system
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systems
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.
In
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the
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this
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reason
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,reason
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figures
of
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for
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death
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the death
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rate are very less. Thur, the government should provide
same
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the same
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rule for
this
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citizen of
nation
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the nation
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. in conclusion,
driving
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a driving
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licence is very beneficial for all
the
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apply
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individuals but authorities should provide appropriate steps
of
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to
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improve
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improving
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traffic
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conditions.
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