Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The
impart
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of producing more and more rubbish which was debatable, has now become more
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controversial
. While some
people
believe that
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more and more rubbish
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is
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in
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is
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not good for
environment
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, others
people
completely disagree with that notion.
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below. On the one hand, the population around the world increasing
nowaday
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nowadays
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, all the items are made of plastic and nylon, it is very difficult to decompose and not good for the
environment
. In my opinion, the
goverment
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government
should charge more and more
tax
for the factory where they
producing
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the items made from plastic bags, it will become
hight
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high
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price, the
people
used less and the
goverment
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government
encourage the factories which
producing
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biodegradable
products
free of
tax
, the
products
will be
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cheaper
cheapper
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than others and the
people
will
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the cheap one to buy and safe for
environment
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. In conclusion, The government should encourage
people
, especially stipulating that government agencies, schools, hospitals, and supermarkets must use equipment and utensils that can be decomposed easily and are good for the
environment
.
Tax
relief or
tax
exemption for places that produce healthy, environmentally friendly
products
and deserve high taxes for
products
that are not good for the
environment
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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