Some people say that mobile phones should be banned in public places such as libraries, shops and public transport. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some
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suggest that the optimal way to solve the distraction problems in public places is prohibiting mobile
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. In my perspective,
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measure is not ineffective because of some reasons.
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of all, it makes sense to ban mobile
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. By doing
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, it reduces much noise and distraction for us to concentrate on working.
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, the talking voice of
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is not better.
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, paying all the attention to mobile
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may cause some accidents. Some
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are addicted to using
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and will not hear what others say and they hit innocent
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, it is impossible to ban
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an essential item like mobile
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that
people
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use most of their time. Mobile
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carry an important role in studying and working.
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will need to use their
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to search for the information for their reports.
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, mobile
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are life
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in some emergencies. If mobile
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are banned in public areas, there will be no
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to call 911 when someone has a
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heart-attack
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.
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, having no
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smart
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is tough for a road blind person. They have to use a moral compass
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of Google
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and
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causes many uncomfortable things for them. To sum up, banning mobile
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in public places is impractical due to some reasons mentioned above and I disagree with
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meaningless action.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Distraction
  • Etiquette
  • Tranquility
  • Prohibit
  • Intrusive
  • Courtesy
  • Essential communication
  • Public decorum
  • Designated areas
  • Safety concerns
  • Noise pollution
  • Digital etiquette
  • Enforcement measures
  • Civic responsibility
  • Silent mode
  • Connectivity
  • Invasiveness
  • Social norms
  • Policy implementation
  • Moderation
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