You recently saw an advertisement in a newspaper seeking volunteers to do unpaid work with local children. You are interested in this work. Write a letter to the head of the organisation. In your letter – express your interest – ask for details of the work that needs to be done – let them know when you are available.

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Dear Sir , Kindly be informed that I am writing

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letter to reveal how I am passionate to do the volunteering work that you have advertised in The Job Opportunity Journal

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week. To being with , as soon as I saw the vacancy announcement , I was very eager to

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is because I really get along well with everyone ,and especially have a good rapport with children . What is more , what I have known is that your organization is giving a hand to

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society ,and I

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want to contribute my efforts to these humanitarian works. Regarding

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description , I would be grateful if you provide me with details . I would like to know about working hours and contract types . Could you please let me know whether there is

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period?

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, as I have recently finished my final year , I am currently free at the moment and ready to join

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you. Thank you for taking the time for reading

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letter and looking forward to hearing good news. Yours faithfully, Mee Mee

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

188 words

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