You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter, Introduce yourself, Explain that you did not buy the items listed, Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to draw your attention to the errors and mistakes listed in the bank statement received yesterday through your e-mail channel.
Firstly
I want to do a brief introduction as I am an account holder detail Title Shaban Raza and the Account number is 07845-14562350 and I have been linked with your prestigious bank and organised my report since 2010. I was shocked after taking a look at my bank description as plenty of products have not been bought but the deduction of payment from my report has been made
in addition
a furniture invoice amounting to 50,000 was debited in my statement I am freaking out and afraid due to
such
transactions I have not made
furthermore
I highlighted the list of transaction for your prompt action.
Secondly
, I am managing my account and being a valued asset I requested to you that the debit amount should be reversed and pay back the sum of transaction amounts to my card in order to fix the false errors. ,
moreover
. there is a need to establish a control system for future prospects to mitigate
such
incidents that adversely affect your customer loyalty.
lastly
, I would appreciate your immediate attention to
this
matter and if you need
further
details you can reach me by phone I
also
attached the highlighted statement for your kind consideration. Yours faithfully, Shaban Raza
Submitted by Shabanraza489 on

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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