Some people think that boys and girls should attend school together. Others feel that they should be educated separately. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
With the thought of
co education
or studying separately for boys and girls there are many different opinions from different perspectives. Add a hyphen
co-education
However
, while
some believe that boys and girls should not study with each other, I agree with those who feel studying together has some positive impact on them. On the one hand, it could be argued that the workload of school management will be much easier as they can experience less number of students
to educate at one time and it can help the teaching staff to manage their workload easier. Moreover
, the physical activities for the boys will take place more oftenly
and there will be different Correct your spelling
often
practicing
exercises for the girls if they get educated separately. Change the spelling
practising
However
, I believe that studying in co
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an
education
environment helps the Replace the word
educational
students
to know different opinion and thoughts as
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apply
only
it will not Rephrase
apply
help
them in their studies but Rephrase
only help
also
helps when the
work as they can have colleague from any gender, I would argue that the if there is only one campus for Correct your spelling
they
students
they can perform all different school activities together, work together in school events and help each other in studies, in my opinion the more number of students
there will be more competition in them as it can help them to motivate themselves to prepare better in the studies, clearing doubts, asking different questions to lectures that can resolve quarries for many students
at once. In conclusion, although
it is debatable to let students
study separately, it can help them as a team in activities that take place every time. Therefore
, on balance, I believe that co education
plays a crucial role among the Add a hyphen
co-education
students
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite