Meat Production requires relatively more lands than crop production. Some people think as land is becoming scare, the world’s meat consumption should be reduced. What measures could be taken to reduce world’s meat consumption? What kind of problem such measures caused?

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Certain
people
are of the opinion that producing
meat
requires a comparatively larger area of land as compared to that of producing vegetables. Since
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land availability is becoming scarce, there is a thought that
people
should follow a vegetarian
diet
rather than a non-vegetarian. Throughout
this
essay, I will discuss the measures that can be adopted to reduce the
consumption
of
meat
and the
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consequent
issues
such
measures could lead to.
To begin
with,
meat
consumption
can be majorly reduced by following an alternative
diet
plan
such
as a vegetarian or a vegan
diet
.
For instance
, many
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people
in the world are shifting to a
plant based
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diet
due to animal cruelty and nutrition
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. Another measure
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could be
meat based
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substitutes, which provide the taste of
meat
but are vegetarian
such
as soya bean, jackfruit etc.
Moreover
, celebrities and members of public institutions, who are idolised by
people
, can promote vegetarianism, which will help
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awareness among
people
about the benefits of a
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diet
and help in process of accepting food derived from crops.
However
, at the same time limiting the
consumption
of
meat
can
also
have some negative effects.
Firstly
, certain vitamins
such
as omega 3, vitamin B etc are majorly available in a
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diet
.
Furthermore
,the lack of these nutrients can affect the
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immunity against certain diseases.
Secondly
, the
meat
industry is
also
a major provider of employment to a lot of
people
and stopping its
consumption
can have a detrimental effect on the economy of a country.
For example
as per a survey conducted in the USA
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at least
35% of the
people
in the food industry are working in
meat
processing or
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. Another reason, though not that major, could be the limited amount of food choices for vegetarians as compared to non-vegetarians. To conclude, there are certain ways of reducing the worldwide intake of
meat
but
then
there are
also
consequences of adopting
such
measures.
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