The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given two diagrams illustrate the percentage of computer owners in the total population between 2002 and 2010
furthermore
, detailed by the level of education for the years 2002 and 2010
Overall
, it is observed that there is a constant and substantial rise in owners of computers over the years in
Change preposition
with
which
2010 Correct pronoun usage
apply
had
the highest proportion. Wrong verb form
having
however
, the least percentage was by no high school graduate.
Firstly
, the owners
of computers in 2002 was little more than 50% of the population Correct quantifier usage
number of owners
whereas
, a steady increase was seen in 2004 and 2006 with little below 60% and slightly above 60% respectively. Moreover
marginal increase in 2008 resulted to
70% Change preposition
in
whereas
, a little below 80% was seen in the year 2010
Secondly
, ownership of computers among no high school grad was 50% higher accounting for 40% in 2010 whereas
, 15% was in 2002. Furthermore
, high school graduates and unfinished graduates had 30% differences 60
% and 80% respectively in 2010 and 30% and 50% respectively in 2002. Change preposition
between 60
In addition
to this
, bachelors
degree and postgraduate and graduate had the highest share of Change noun form
bachelor's
percentage
80 and 90 in 2010 Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
along with
, 60% and 80% in 2002.Submitted by masoodbawazir on
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