You are moving to a new country to go to university and will need a part-time job. You have a friend who lives in that country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • apologise for not staying in touch • explain why you’re moving to this country • ask your friend if he/she can help you find a job.

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Dear Sam, I am really sorry that I did not keep you in touch prolong months. Because recently I have been deactivated my Facebook and Instagram accounts because I need to focus more time on the university final year project.

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, I lost your Whatsapp no too, despite I was unable to contact you for nearly nine months. I would like to apologise for my uncertain situation. I have completed my Bachelor's degree in civil engineering in December 2021 with 1st class honours.

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I have got an opportunity to follow PhD in structural engineering at Monash University in Melbourne, Australia. I will be there in August 2022 and my lectures will start in early September. I heard from your younger brother, that you moved to Melbourne

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year with your family. Actually, I am facing financial overburden to pay my tuition fees because I have obtained half scholarship of course payment. In spite of that, I planned to do a part-time job that will assist me to pay my remaining money. I believe you may help have good contacts to get work on time. I would need your help on

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

194 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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