Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed rather them to work for a company or organisation why might this be the case? what could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

The figure illustrates the information about the change which occurred in a public

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in 1920 and nowadays. It Can be seen from the figure that there are seven new features which were established in

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today. In 1920, there was a fountain in the middle of the

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, which is replaced by a rose garden recently.

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, there were four seats which are distributed and the right of a fountain, while these seats are placed around a rose garden today.

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, a children's play area is structured in the new

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of the

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of a pond for water plants.

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there were three Rose Gardens in the later

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of the

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, there was no cafe which is constructed in the new

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, the water feature takes place in a glass house which was in the past to

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, an underground car

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is done, which was not built earlier.