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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed rather them to work for a company or organisation why might this be the case? what could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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The figure illustrates the information about the change which occurred in a public
park
 in 1920 and nowadays. It Can be seen from the figure that there are seven new features which were established in
this
 public
park
 today. In 1920, there was a fountain in the middle of the
park
, which is replaced by a rose garden recently.
moreover
, there were four seats which are distributed and the right of a fountain, while these seats are placed around a rose garden today.
in addition
, a children's play area is structured in the new
design
 of the
park
instead
 of a pond for water plants.
Although
,
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 there were three Rose Gardens in the later
design
 of the
park
, there was no cafe which is constructed in the new
design
.
also
, the water feature takes place in a glass house which was in the past to
design
.
finally
, an underground car
park
 is done, which was not built earlier.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employment
  • freelancing
  • entrepreneurship
  • autonomy
  • financial stability
  • work-life balance
  • financial insecurity
  • lack of support
  • resources
  • long working hours
  • uncertain income
  • job security
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