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Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Many people think that working for
the
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 similar organization-
that
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is good, but others believe that it is better to
work
 for unfamiliar corporations. From my perspective, the best way -
work
 for similar companies. In my opinion, everyone should be loyal
for
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 their organization and continue to
work
 there for approaching retirement. In my own life I prefer to
work
 in
one
place
, do not move to another
place
. If
person
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love
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 his profession, the results may be helpful for everyone ,
thus
 he
have
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 to
work
 in
one
place
. With colleagues worker should be sociable
as a result
, all his works are likely to be done well.
On the other hand
, numerous individuals like working in different companies. From
my
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 point of view,
that
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 is not bad. Maybe worker is
uncommunitive
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uncommunicative
,
thus
 he cannot
work
 with colleagues in
one
 company.
Then
 he changes his
work
.
In addition
, maybe he does not like working in
one
place
 for
long
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 time ,
therefore
 he alters his job. To conclude, I totally agree
with
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that it is working for the same company. For me in the
first
place
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 the
work
well
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was well
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 done.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • stability
  • loyalty
  • seniority
  • job satisfaction
  • rapidly changing job market
  • adapt to
  • work culture
  • career progression
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  • adaptability
  • career aspirations
  • dynamic nature
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