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A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

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Dear Sir/Mam, I am writing
this
 letter to apply for a waiter position which has been recently advertised in a local newspaper. I am Sathish Raghumani, graduated master's degree in culinary arts and I have two years of overseas experience as a service captain in a fine dining restaurant. Throughout my experience, I have gained lots of communication
skills
, customer service, food handling
skills
 and order processing
skills
. As I always admired working for luxury hotel chains, I am very much interested in joining your team. My management studies have taught me a deep understanding of industry standards and customer satisfaction. I am confident that my
skills
 and dedication will make a positive contribution to your team. I am available for an interview at your earliest convenience. You can contact me at (xxxxxxxxxx). I am looking forward to the opportunity to discuss the
further
 steps. Thank you and Have a nice day! Yours Faithfully, Sathish Raghumani
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task achievement
Ensure to provide more details about your specific responsibilities and achievements in your previous role to strengthen your application.
coherence cohesion
Consider breaking the second paragraph into two separate paragraphs for clearer organization and readability.
greeting and closing
The letter has a clear and respectful greeting and closing, maintaining a professional tone.
complete response
The response effectively addresses all parts of the task, including current activities, suitability, and availability for an interview.
logical structure
Overall structure of the letter is logical and easy to follow, making it coherent.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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