Some countries have introduced laws to limit working hours for employees. Why are these laws introduced? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
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, while doing my thesis and taking other courses, I gained knowledge
on climate change issues, which allowed me to understand in-depth the relationship between this
phenomenon, air quality and, for example
, the high consumption of non-sustainable energies worldwide. Therefore
, when researching and analyzing the measures that can be applied to contribute in part to climate change, I observed that the path of sustainability
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about corporate sustainability
focused on the energy
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work experience, in 2021 I joined the company
CI Milpa SA, which is my family company
and where I currently participate in areas of presidency, environmental management and energy
projects. Among my work objectives is the creation of the energy
and environmental departments in the company
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in environmental engineering based on the management and public policies that govern us nationally and internationally. Likewise
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projects, taking into consideration that Colombia
currently has a high potential for the use of solar and wind energy
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to having about 70% of its energy
matrix based on hydropower.
Considering the above, I believe that the City University of Hong Kong and the program offered by the master’s in science degree in energy
and environment fits adequately with the learning topics of my interest. Because the curriculum is multidisciplinary and focuses on executing in the practice of industries and companies everything related to sustainability
. Another point that would be enriching for my career is that the program focuses on analysis and problem solving which I consider a valuable skill to apply in a country like Colombia
whose political, social, economic, and environmental context is very varied. Also
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and Colombia
through correct the application of clean and efficient energies and the development of environmental solutions.Submitted by lsparra98 on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion