Some people argue that sending criminals to prison is the best method of dealing with them. However, others believe that education and job training are better way to help them. Discuss both views and give your opinion

People have different views about how to mitigate the

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rates. While there are some arguments that putting

lawbreakers

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behind the bars is the best way to tackle them, I personally believe that giving them good vocational training and higher

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would reduce the problem. There are two main reasons why it could be asserted that locking

offenders

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up in jail is appropriate. The

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reason is that the

criminals

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will no longer pose threats to

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. Obviously, removing the negative individuals from

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will ensure the safety of the citizens, which relieves the stress in the local people about dealing with those

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again and help them to get a better life condition. Another reason is that placing

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behind the bars would be a deterrent to the potential

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. As watching

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be punished and serve a long sentence in jail, potential

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might rethink the

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they are going to commit, which

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spreads a lesson to

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that will deter these

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from committing another

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. Despite the above arguments, I would assert that

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and vocational training should be taken into consideration in order to rehabilitate

lawbreakers

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. It is obvious that the root reason why people end up behind the bars is that they did not have good

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or

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opportunities.

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, if

offenders

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were able to learn a specific skill

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required for a

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, they could find a well-paid

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to cover up their needs and contribute positively to

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. These not only equip the

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with necessary

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skills but

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help them have a

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chance to have a normal life, as well as reduce the resentment to

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. To take Finland as an example, the

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rate in

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country never exceeds 0.5%, which is the lowest point in the

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rate. To achieve

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success, Finland's government with authorities released a program to help

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receive a good

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and vocational training yet be controlled strictly by `o` In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against methods to deal with

lawbreakers

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, but it seems to me that giving them opportunities to adopt new skills would rehabilitate those

criminals

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.