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Many businesses think that the new employees who graduate from schools lack basic interpersonal skills, such as working with colleagues as a team. What has caused this and what are solutions to the problems?

#businesses #employees #graduate #schools #lack #skills #colleagues #team
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IN PRESENT DAYS, MANY COMPANIES COMPLAIN ABOUT SENIOR WORKERS' BEHAVIOUR. IT HAS BEEN THOUGHT THAT THEY ARE INCOMPETENT WITH BASIC INTERPERSONAL SKILLS.
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 ESSAY WILL EXPLAIN THE POSSIBLE CAUSES OF
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 PATTERN AND THE SOLUTIONS TO
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 PROBLEM.
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, EMPLOYERS TEND TO PRIORITISE ACADEMIC GRADUATION POINTS OVER SOCIAL
ACTIVITIES
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 TO HIRE SOMEONE AND, NEEDLESS TO SAY, AS A CONSEQUENCE PUPILS FOCUS ON ACADEMIC DEGREES
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 OF JOINING SPORTS
ACTIVITIES
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 OR SERVICES REQUIRED BY BEING IN A
TEAM
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. TO ILLUSTRATE, A STUDENT WHO HAS AN AMBITION ABOUT BEING A WELL-PAID WORKER OR HAVING HIGH STANDARD LIFE CONDITIONS IN ADULT LIFE PREFERS TO STUDY MATHS
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 OF SPENDING TIME IN A SERVICE BECAUSE
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 SPENT TIME HAS NO IMPACT ON DESIRED ADULT LIFE. AND IT IS TOTALLY UNDERSTANDABLE TO PREPARE FOR A WEALTHY, SUCCESSFUL FUTURE. AS A SOLUTION, EXTRACURRICULAR
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 AS JOINING A SPOR
TEAM
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 OR SERVING IN A COMMUNITY SERVICE SHOULD BE ENCOURAGED BY THE EDUCATION MINISTRY AND LARGE SCALE COMPANIES.
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, EXTRA CREDIT MAY BE ADDED FOR GRADUATION DEGREE OR IT MAY BE IMPLIED THAT WORKING WITH A
TEAM
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 MAY INCREASE THE RATE OF THE INTERVIEWER'S HIRING POSSIBILITY DURING THE EVALUATION PROCESS. TO SUM UP, THE EDUCATION SYSTEM AND TERMS OF THE HIRING PROCESS CREATE AN ENVIRONMENT THAT STUDENTS HAVE TO STUDY AND SHARE NO TIME FOR OTHER
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 IN IT AS A SOLUTION BEING A MEMBER OF A
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 REGARDLESS OF THE FIELD IS ENCOURAGED BY MINISTERS OR HIGH PROFILE COMPANIES.
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