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Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people believe that
work
 which is enjoyable is more significant than the task which gives a
lot
 of fund or many
opportunities
 in
work
-life, while others disagree with
such
 an idea which
work
 gives a
lot
 of
opportunities
 resulting in better
work
-life. From my perspective, an enjoyable
job
 which makes us become satisfied helps us feel more energetic and comfortable in the
work
.
On the contrary
, the
work
 which gives a
lot
 of money or more
opportunities
 in
work
-
lifelife
Correct your spelling
life life
lifeline
 to us may cause us to feel uncomfortable and unhappy with
this
work
 because we have to spend so much time in
this
job
 duty until we complete
this
 working task.
Moreover
,
although
 the reward of the
job
 performance of unenjoyable
work
 which we do not want to operate may provide a
lot
 of money and several
opportunities
 more than jobs which we want to operate, it may have negative impacts on our physical and mental health, and it will become worse if the working environment is catastrophic.
Besides
, performing jobs which we want to do will make us become more hard-working,
such
 as finding the specific knowledge and expanding our world horizon.
In contrast
, if we choose the
job
 which we do not want to do, it will have a negative repercussion on the working atmosphere of our firm and other colleagues.
In addition
, the result of choosing a boring
job
 is that we do not want to keep developing ourselves and find valuable knowledge for improving ourselves in order to provide a
lot
 of benefits to ourselves and our firm. In conclusion, from my point of view, I strongly agree with idea that we should choose enjoyable
work
 rather than
work
 which gives a
lot
 of benefits even if that
work
 will provide a better life for us. the result of choosing enjoyable
work
 will make us feel enthusiastic, delightful, and enjoyable for working. The more you keep improving yourself, the more
job
 title and money you will get as well.
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