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Nowadays children watch a lot of tv and playing video games. However some people think that these activities are not good for child's mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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I actually agree with
this
 point of view.Nowadays children are addicted to electric divorces and it is the most important thing of their life.Not only children, of course, but adults and teenagers are
also
 teenagers are like it too and do
this
 affectionate of activity.I saw an oflot community who are addicted to
this
 action, and it is a really bad influence on our energy .
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 of ,all we can hurt our mental well-being ,for ,
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example we can hurt our eyes or back.Cause of
this
 , a lot of crowds are isolated in their homes and like to be alone, they will be methanotrophs after that.Mithantrophia is a kind of illness in which society is isolated from others and does not want to watch them , methanotrophs prefer to live alone with their electronic devices .There is a lot of reasons why the nation can not go out to play with some children ,often
this
 is the cause of their mental energy .If a child is shy or can not do the same action they prefer to stay at home , isolate themselves from others and play video games or watch television .I think it is quite bad , and we must help
this
 affectionate community. folk are must not forget who are they and do kinds of exercise that do not hurt their mental fitness.Remember we can buy a clock but not asleep,with money we can buy a bed but not asleep ,with money we can buy products but not our appetite ,with money we can buy everything but not our mental well-being!
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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