You recently sent some documents by post, but they did not arrive. Write a letter to the post manager. In your letter - Give details of the situation - Describe the documents - Say what action you want the post office to take.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing for my

courier

that has not arrived.

This

was a packaging I sent to my wife by UPS on the 16th of Feb 2022 and it seems to be lost. It is more than a month since I sent

this

courier

and when I called your customer service staff they are confirming it is in Seattle but not delivered. I have made more than ten calls and

you

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staff is just making

promise

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a promise

the promise

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that it will be delivered soon but no action after that. It is important papers for my kid’s school admission forms and original birth certificates. It

also

has score sheets for both my children from Brampton Kings school and school leaving

certificate

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certificates

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. I am requesting you to please check on my

courier

and kindly give me an update as your staff are not helping me. You can email me, and the details are in the receipt copy along with

this

letter. I am waiting to hear from you soon and hope you find my

courier

and have it delivered. Yours sincerely, Tamar

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

180 words

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