You recently sent some documents by post, but they did not arrive. Write a letter to the post manager. In your letter - Give details of the situation - Describe the documents - Say what action you want the post office to take.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing for my

courier

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that has not arrived.

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was a packaging I sent to my wife by UPS on the 16th of Feb 2022 and it seems to be lost. It is more than a month since I sent

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courier

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and when I called your customer service staff they are confirming it is in Seattle but not delivered. I have made more than ten calls and

you

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staff is just making

promise

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a promise

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that it will be delivered soon but no action after that. It is important papers for my kid’s school admission forms and original birth certificates. It

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has score sheets for both my children from Brampton Kings school and school leaving

certificate

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certificates

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. I am requesting you to please check on my

courier

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and kindly give me an update as your staff are not helping me. You can email me, and the details are in the receipt copy along with

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letter. I am waiting to hear from you soon and hope you find my

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and have it delivered. Yours sincerely, Tamar

Toni RFri Mar 25 2022

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

180 words

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