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the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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This
 chart demonstrates that the information compares
coffee
 and
tea
 consuming habits in the
last
 4 weeks with the percentages of people living in different cities in Australia,
such
 as
Sydney
,
Melbourne
,
Brisbane
,
Adelaide
, and
Hobart
. We can observe that people living in the
center
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 areas of cities in Australia are likely to drink and buy
instant
coffee
 more than fresh
coffee
. The
populations
 who dwell in
Sydney
,
Melbourne
,
Brisbane
,
Adelaide
, and
Hobart
 drink and buy fresh
coffee
 43%, 42%, 33%, 34%, and 38% of other
city
residents
 respectively.
In contrast
, the
populations
 who love to drink and buy
instant
coffee
 have 43%, 42%, 33%, 34%, and 38% in
Sydney
,
Melbourne
,
Brisbane
,
Adelaide
, and
Hobart
 respectively.
Moreover
, the information shows that people living in
Sydney
,
Melbourne
,
Brisbane
, and
Hobart
 like to go to a café for purchasing
coffee
 and
tea
 more than
instant
coffee
. By calculating differentiated percentages of
populations
 purchasing
coffee
 or
tea
 compares
populations
 drinking
instant
coffee
 more than 21 % for
city
residents
 in
Sydney
, 23 % for
city
residents
 in
Melbourne
, 4 % for
city
residents
 in
Brisbane
, and 8 % for
city
residents
 in
Hobart
.
On the contrary
, the
populations
 buying
instant
coffee
 compares
populations
 deciding to buy
coffee
 or
tea
more
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 than 3 % for
city
residents
 in
Adelaide
.
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