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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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People have to
work
 in order to earn the money to feed the family. In
this
 essay, we’ll talk about whether it’s better to
work
 for the same
organization
 or
different
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organization
.
To begin
 with, Working in the same
organization
 is good.
You’ll
 be a key person and know a lot of
thing
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things
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 about the
company
.
You’ll
 know the procedure of the
company
 so that you can
work
 fast.
However
, being in the same environment,
you’ll
 never see how other
company
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work
.
You’ll
 have a narrow point of view and that could be a problem when there’s a complicated job. From my point of view, the
salary
 is not increased much when you’re in the same
company
.
On the other hand
, working in
the
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 different
company
 will require you to start over when you move to
different
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company
. Each
company
 has their own working procedure. Even though you are professional at the old
place
, moving to the new one will require you to start from zero. After you know how the
company
run
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, you can use your experience combined with the knowledge you learned from
new
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a new
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place
 to maximize the
work
 quality in the new
place
. In most cases, moving to the new
place
 usually give you much more
salary
 from the old one so you can increase your
salary
 dramatically. In conclusion, Working in the same
organization
 can be good if you don’t want to start over again.
However
, In my opinion, I prefer to
work
 in
the
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 different
organization
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organizations
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 over time because
you’ll
 gain more knowledge and know-how and the
salary
 can be increased significantly.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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  • Corporate ladder
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  • Industry exposure
  • Innovation
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