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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last 10 years. Discuss the cause and effects of this disturbing trend

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These days the number of kids suffering from obesity in Western nations has risen up to 20%since the past decay.There are a huge number of cases which has caused the issue. Some of the major ones will be discussed following. To start with,lack of mobility due to using technology can be considered one of the factors. They won't tend to participate
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 classes.What's more,seeing tons of advertisements
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 fast food on T.V persuade them towards having
unhealthy
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 diet which is the major source of gaining weight.
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,parents are too busy to pay attention to their
children
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 routines and
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 time together. To sum up,families should spend more time together, take care
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 children's nutrition and physical activities to prevent the problem.
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