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Nowdays it is easy to apply for and given a credit card. However,some people experience problems when they are not able to pay their debts back. In your opinion, do the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantage?

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Today,any eligible
one
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 can easily get a
credit
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card
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.
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,
credit
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cards
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 provide financial support while emergencies,but they
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 can be a tough
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 to repay. I strongly believe that the advantages and disadvantages of plastic money depend upon the user's mind.
Firstly
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,if we look at the darker side of
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cards
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, cardholders can spend a fixed amount limited by the bank and pay later after a particular
time
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. Sometimes at the
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 of the bill ,payment the debtor is not in the condition of repayment,due to any reason.
One
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's financial record can be ruined by late payments.
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,
credit
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cards
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 are
also
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 acceptable on all online portals. It is the responsibility of the cardholder to use it very carefully while filling in the details of the
card
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 on various websites. The sites can be a fraud and hackers can hack and block the
card
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, they
also
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 can misuse it. Apart from
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,there are various advantages of
credit
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cards
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. The main benefit of these
cards
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 is, provide financial support,
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,at the
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 of emergencies
one
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 can pay their hospital bills and can settle down their previous debts.
In addition
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 to
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, it
also
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 increases the purchasing power of the individual. Because of the pay later option, the person can buy anything under his/her
card
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 limit and can pay after some
time
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.
One
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 more benefit of the
credit
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card
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 is , paying the bill in EMI, which means the total spending of the
card
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 can be paid in the installments if the person is not able to pay the whole amount. In the end,there are various pros and cons of plastic money,but it all depends upon the mindset of the users.
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