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In many countries, more and more people are becoming jobless. What problems do you think this will cause to individuals and the society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters

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Unemployment is a serious threat to the modern economy. The current youth faces the problem of lack of job very vividly worldwide.
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 of a job.
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 with, if there is no productive youth in a country, it will not have any significant growth in the future.
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 is because young
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 are the tender buds of
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 and creativity. Without their help, the developments get staggered. In fact, the young adults will not be able to find financial support
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 support their families.
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 will lead to
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, mental depression and anxiety among
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teenagers.
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, the individuals turn into criminals due to
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 background. Somalia is a clear cut example for
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 case. Their pirates hijacked ships and started robbery of commodities for their survival. But what happened
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 is really terrifying.
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 run out of food, shelter and money & eventually become offenders and
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 can pass over generations
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. For a society, unemployment leads to serious issues. When left with no work,
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 tend to migrate to other places which provide them with employment, better opportunities and livelihood.
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, the community over there shatters and even the country thrive to survive. Apart from these numerous problems, the issues can be resolved by the timely action of
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 and various
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. The government should provide their individuals with sufficient job opportunities and
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practical
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approach
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 to different fields during
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.
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, other organisations can make the
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 of a depressed country aware
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 the positive aspects of migration. To sum up, unemployment has many
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 problems and
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timely remedies should be adopted to minimise the consequences.
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