In many countries, more and more people are becoming jobless. What problems do you think this will cause to individuals and the society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters

Unemployment is a serious threat to the modern economy. The current youth faces the problem of lack of job very vividly worldwide.
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essay will delve into both the consequences and remedies of
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of a job.
To begin
with, if there is no productive youth in a country, it will not have any significant growth in the future.
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is because young
people
are the tender buds of
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and creativity. Without their help, the developments get staggered. In fact, the young adults will not be able to find financial support
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support their families.
This
will lead to
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, mental depression and anxiety among
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teenagers.
Moreover
, the individuals turn into criminals due to
this
background. Somalia is a clear cut example for
this
case. Their pirates hijacked ships and started robbery of commodities for their survival. But what happened
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is really terrifying.
People
run out of food, shelter and money & eventually become offenders and
this
can pass over generations
also
. For a society, unemployment leads to serious issues. When left with no work,
people
tend to migrate to other places which provide them with employment, better opportunities and livelihood.
As a result
, the community over there shatters and even the country thrive to survive. Apart from these numerous problems, the issues can be resolved by the timely action of
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and various
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. The government should provide their individuals with sufficient job opportunities and
also
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approach
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to different fields during
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time of
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.
Furthermore
, other organisations can make the
people
of a depressed country aware
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the positive aspects of migration. To sum up, unemployment has many
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problems and
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timely remedies should be adopted to minimise the consequences.
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