In their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way.
It can be seen that
diagram
shows the manufacturing process for making Correct article usage
the diagram
from
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apply
sugar
cane. Use synonyms
Firstly
, the Linking Words
sugar
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canes
are growing in 12-18 months. And after 18 months are harvested Use synonyms
Linking Words
this
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these
sugar
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canes
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, and
harvesting Add a missing verb
are, and
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this
Correct determiner usage
these
canes
by Use synonyms
combaines
or people harvesting. Correct your spelling
companies
combines
This
harvesting Linking Words
sugar
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canes
crushing and making a Use synonyms
juice
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Linking Words
this
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sugar
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juice
purifying in the limestone filter. Use synonyms
This
purified Linking Words
juice
is heated in the evaporator, and Use synonyms
this
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juice
becomes Use synonyms
to
syrup. Change preposition
apply
Next
, is used the syrup to centrifuge. Linking Words
Then
the centrifuge makes separates Linking Words
sugar
crystals from Use synonyms
syrup
. Add an article
the syrup
Finally
, these separated Linking Words
sugar
crystals are left to dry and cool Use synonyms
this
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sugar
.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite