The government should ban smoking in all public places, even though this would restrict some other people's freedoms. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer
The issue of smoking in public is constantly raising . Some hold the view that it's so harmful as smokers badly affect the air and the health of humans surrounding them ,
others
have a Correct your spelling
diverse
divers
view that they can act the way they want neglecting Correct your spelling
diverse
others
needs and situations . In my opinion , I agree that the government should restrict smoking even ban it in parks and Change noun form
others'
other's
public
transportation .My convention will be Change preposition
on public
further
explained .
On the one hand, some argue that smoking is very harmful to human beings and it can cause serious damage to lungs
. Not only does it harm the smoker but Correct article usage
the lungs
also
citizens
surrounding him or her . Correct article usage
the citizens
For example
, patients with asthma or respiratory diseases that it
could be lethal to them . Correct pronoun usage
apply
Besides
that, it can be so detrimental to the environment . A prime example, starting a fire and burning a parks
like what happened once in Oregon state,USA.
Correct the article-noun agreement
parks
a park
On the other hand
, others
say that they should experience freedom
of choice when it comes to where to smoke . Add an article
the freedom
Usually
they are convinced that Add a comma
,Usually
environment
will not be harmed . Correct article usage
the environment
Also
, they believe that whoever doesn't like the smell can simply move away . What can be said is that they want to experience their freedom anytime, anywhere.
In conclusion , after this
essay has manifested the above mentioned
views , it can be reiterated that freedom has limitations if it harms Add a hyphen
above-mentioned
others
. Hence
, proponents can't live alone isolated in a closed community as we share the air as well as public placesSubmitted by Abeer.lalhmd49 on
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