The government should ban smoking in all public places, even though this would restrict some other people's freedoms. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer

The issue of smoking in public is constantly raising . Some hold the view that it's so harmful as smokers badly affect the air and the health of humans surrounding them ,
others
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view that they can act the way they want neglecting
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needs and situations . In my opinion , I agree that the government should restrict smoking even ban it in parks and
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transportation .My convention will be
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explained . On the one hand, some argue that smoking is very harmful to human beings and it can cause serious damage to
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. Not only does it harm the smoker but
also
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surrounding him or her .
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, patients with asthma or respiratory diseases that
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could be lethal to them .
Besides
that, it can be so detrimental to the environment . A prime example, starting a fire and burning
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like what happened once in Oregon state,USA.
On the other hand
,
others
say that they should experience
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of choice when it comes to where to smoke .
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they are convinced that
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will not be harmed .
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, they believe that whoever doesn't like the smell can simply move away . What can be said is that they want to experience their freedom anytime, anywhere. In conclusion , after
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views , it can be reiterated that freedom has limitations if it harms
others
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Hence
, proponents can't live alone isolated in a closed community as we share the air as well as public places
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