Some people think that employers should not be concerned about how employees dress at work but the quality of work only. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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. Even though, some people believe that company directors must not worry about what their workers wear but focus on the quality of their job others think the opposite.

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may enable good

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outcomes but improper dressing may lead to poor morals at a

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, many employees perform better when they are dressed in what makes them comfortable,

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helps increase

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how fast they are able to achieve tasks.

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most companies that have recorded quality

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results by their staff are those that allow them to wear what brings out the best in them.

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enables pleasant task achievements.

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attaining their goals at a good rate, most staff may tend to behave immorally towards each other because of improper dressing, Even people that visit these facilities might not respect

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workers.

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if health workers were not instructed to wear

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attires when attending to patients these unwell individuals may not be willing to take the

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instructions seriously because of

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of respect towards them.

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facility. To conclude, I don’t agree completely that employers should not worry about what their staff wear just because they are able to achieve goals better, but think that allowing

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conduct may attract immorality and disrespect.