Some people think that employers should not be concerned about how employees dress at work but the quality of work only. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the years the way employees dress has been considered
of
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apply
importance
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important
at
a Change preposition
in
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workplace
work place
. Even though, some people believe that company directors must not worry about what their workers wear but focus on the quality of their job others think the opposite. Correct your spelling
workplace
This
essay will agree to
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with
this
opinion to an extent because this
may enable good work
outcomes but improper dressing may lead to poor morals at a Correct your spelling
workplace
work place
.
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workplace
Firstly
, many employees perform better when they are dressed in what makes them comfortable, this
helps increase on
how fast they are able to achieve tasks. Change preposition
apply
For
example
most companies that have recorded quality Add a comma
,example
work
results by their staff are those that allow them to wear what brings out the best in them. Therefore
this
enables pleasant task achievements.
However
despite Add a comma
,However
this companies
attaining their goals at a good rate, most staff may tend to behave immorally towards each other because of improper dressing, Even people that visit these facilities might not respect Change the determiner
this company
these companies
such
workers. For
example
if health workers were not instructed to wear Add a comma
,example
descent
attires when attending to patients these unwell individuals may not be willing to take the Correct your spelling
decent
doctors
instructions seriously because of Change noun form
doctor's
doctors'
lack
of respect towards them. Correct article usage
a lack
This
is why dress code is a very important factor at a work
facility.
To conclude, I don’t agree completely that employers should not worry about what their staff wear just because they are able to achieve goals better, but think that allowing such
conduct may attract immorality and disrespect.Submitted by felicamwinji on
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