Nowadays exploring the galaxy has become increasingly common around the world.
However
, some people think that the funds used on these projects could be used to strengthen countries. I totally agree Linking Words
to
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with
this
opinion and believe that governments should use Linking Words
its
money to improve Correct pronoun usage
their
its
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their
states
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state's
states'
health
care facilities and Use synonyms
also
improve roads.
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Firstly
, many nations in Africa have very poor Linking Words
health
systems which Use synonyms
is
mainly due to Change the verb form
are
lack
of resources to sustain quality Correct article usage
a lack
health
care. Use synonyms
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example
most hospitals in Southern Africa do not have medicine, equipment etc Add a comma
,example
that is
needed in order to treat patients accurately up to standard. Linking Words
This
is why leaders should allocate funds to their nations Linking Words
instead
of wasting them to explore space.
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Secondly
, most countries Linking Words
among
the developing world have very bad transport systems, if people that govern these nations prioritize finances in making good roads a lot of recorded road traffic accidents may reduce. Change preposition
in
For
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instance
many fatal car Add a comma
,instance
crushes
happen in Africa mostly because of poor road networks. Correct your spelling
crashes
Hence
, using cash to explore space is not beneficial at all.
In conclusion, I argue that even though exploring the galaxy may benefit the world, Most developing states have a lot of problems to work on which include providing quality Linking Words
health
care and improving roads,Use synonyms