You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • describe the training course you want to do • explain what the company could do to help you • say how the course will be useful for your job

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Dear Mr Asare I am Abigail supervisor head of the cosmetics department and
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would be grateful if you could assist me to partake in a skincare technology
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which is being organised by the International Cosmetics Institute in Ghana.The
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would be held here in Accra from the 1st of May to the 20th of May 20222. Since the
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will be taught within ten-payday I would like to take some days off.With the help of my assistant who has all the required skills and knowledge of more than three years of ,experience
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believe my department will be well taken care of. The skincare technology
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will help the company to determine the various skin types of customers and the type of products the company can produce to suit their needs.In ,addition we will be taught new emerging technology used in the cosmetics industries and how to operate them,which I believe will save as cost of outsourcing except in training after purchasing
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machinery to use the company. Hoping to hear from you soon in regards to my request. Yours faithfully, Abigail Nkulenu.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional development
  • training course
  • skillset enhancement
  • educational leave
  • sponsorship
  • reimbursement
  • knowledge integration
  • work efficiency
  • career progression
  • continuing education
  • team contribution
  • productivity boost
  • expertise building
  • industry standards
  • hands-on experience
  • networking opportunities
  • cutting-edge techniques
  • best practices
  • return on investment
  • in-house training
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