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Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values)

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The line graph illustrates the quantity of acid is produced by the mouth when eating sweets foods ,which can make tooth decay from 0 to 40
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. Overall,it can be seen that honey increases dramatically
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 levels the fastest. Looking at the
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 level of the fruit sugar begins at 7
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 eating and
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 decreases significantly to around 4.2
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 before reaching its peak to 7
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 at the moment eaten and
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 drop to about 3.5
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 rise slowly to 7
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 in 40
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. Turning to the
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 levels of the honey remain stable to just below 5
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 between 5 to 10
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 starting at 7
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