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Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values)

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The line graph illustrates the quantity of acid is produced by the mouth when eating sweets foods ,which can make tooth decay from 0 to 40
minutes
. Overall,it can be seen that honey increases dramatically
PH
 levels the fastest. Looking at the
PH
 level of the fruit sugar begins at 7
PH
 in the
first
 eating and
then
 decreases significantly to around 4.2
PH
 in 5
minutes
 before reaching its peak to 7
PH
 at the moment eaten and
significant
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 drop to about 3.5
PH
 in 5
minutes
 and
then
 rise slowly to 7
PH
 in 40
minutes
. Turning to the
PH
 levels of the honey remain stable to just below 5
PH
 between 5 to 10
minutes
 after
first
 starting at 7
PH
 in 0
minutes
 before its ends at 7
PH
 in 25
minutes
.
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