Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that,in today's world,subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals believe that

history

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is one of

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school subjects.

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,

others

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think that today,

science

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such

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as math, physic and technology are more crucial to be taught. I am

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with

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opinion.

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, every nation has

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own

histories

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and it

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to be taught from elementary school until

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the senior

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level

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in most countries.

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is important to maintain some historical events in the past from the extinction.

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and understanding important past events, it would trigger the feeling of love and pride

of

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in

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their nation.

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, Indonesia, which is a member of

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Asia communities, has a long journey until they are at

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stage. Indonesia declared

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Independence day in August 1945 after a long

suffer

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under the colonies of

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and Japan

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more than 350 years.

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,

history

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has an important position to identify the new generation about

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the background

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of their nation.

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, the advancement of countries is closely related to

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how deep their new generation master in

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, technology and

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others

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related subjects.

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, at

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very young age, students in the USA, Japan and China were taught the very basic knowledge of sciences in form of

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the game

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game

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games

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,

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method

is believe

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successfully trigger the curiosity of natural

phenomenom

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phenomenon

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, it is crucial

to

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for

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the

official

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officials

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and pupils aware

regarding

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of

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the

important

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importance

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of

science

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to be taught

in

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every

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of education, from the very basics until the most

advance

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level

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of

science

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at the university.

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, I consider that

science

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such

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as math, physic and

others

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are more important than

history

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. To conclude,

history

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is important to be given as a subject at school in order to maintain the feeling of love and pride

to

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in

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their country

specially

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at the early

level

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of education.

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,

science

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is more vital

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others

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subjects as well as

history

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.