‘Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past. This behaviour is now having a negative impact on society.’ Discuss. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In
this
present day and age , almost every parent does not get
the
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respect from their offspring , and
this
issue has ignited public attention as it badly impacts
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society. In
this
essay , I will seek to examine the complex issue. Admittedly , there are many
behind
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reasons why
younger
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generation
do
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not pay the esteem to parents.
First
of all , since the turn of the 21st Century , not only
father
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a father
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but
also
mother
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has to work outside to make both ends meet .
As a result
of
this
, there has been little family time which leads to lesser social interaction and emotional attachment between family members .
Accordingly
,
although
children become independent and mature enough , they suppose paying respect is not a concern anymore at the same time .
In addition
to that , successive waves of globalization and
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advanced technology
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one of the devastating matters . Earlier , parents were their
first
teachers in life ; whatever they want to know anything , they could directly ask our older generation .
However
, in
this
contemporary epoch , Google and
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You Tube
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take place over parents by all means , and social
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medias
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turn out to be their best partners. Ultimately , it has been widely accepted that parents’ advice and suggestions are no longer useful .
Consequently
, they do not need to obey these words ,and they become rebellious. In conclusion , it can be seen that
this
is the biggest issue that society is undergoing nowadays. In my humble opinion , we can mitigate these problems to a certain extent by analyzing shadow factors.
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