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In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Communication has different forms
such
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 as photos, motions, and written
contents
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. There is a consensus among people that argue that the power of visual
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 surpassed the written one.
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both
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visual and non-visual content, and
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 the matter which is that pictures, movies, and infographics have more power than written
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contents
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. These days many people believe that visual form has more
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 than
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written form, and there are several reasons why individuals hold
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, pictures can stimulate the brain and could increase the interconnectedness between both of the hemispheres;
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, the human mind is more
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susceptible
 to colours.
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,
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tend
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 to prefer images and graphics more than
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, and
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 is because it has a way to
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 to them. From a marketing viewpoint, many
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 are using visual content to attract costumer.
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, there are individuals that think that
written
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 word is beneficial, and
this
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 is because people can elaborate
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, concepts, and sometimes languages.
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 visual
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 are more appealing, researchers have a tendency to prefer written materials. In fact, written
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 can dissect topics, subjects, and modules.
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, many educators agree that the best way to improve a language is through reading.
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,
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 professors assign graduate students to read more articles, research, and books. In conclusion, I believe that both
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mediums are powerful,
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, it is a matter of preference and goal.
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, if students want to grasp a topic, they may read written forms. It is my opinion that visual
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 is much more effective than
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non-visual forms, and
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 is because it is more
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available
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Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Visual communication
  • Emotional impact
  • Transcend language barriers
  • Universality
  • Infographic
  • Memory retention
  • Misinterpretation
  • Manipulation
  • Complementary
  • Evocative
  • Multimedia
  • Contextual understanding
  • Ambiguity
  • Visual literacy
  • Instant communication
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