Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with relevant examples.
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Nowadays, it can be seen that keeping
environment
safe and healthy is a big task for the Correct article usage
the environment
govenment
services as well as for the people themselves. Well, it is believed that Correct your spelling
government
whether
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apply
use
of natural resources
should be stopped or replaced by different energy resources
. However
, others argue that banning the use
of essential assests
can highly affect the economical graph.Correct your spelling
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However
, i
am unable to Change the capitalization
I
suppport
any one point of view. Correct your spelling
support
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discuss both the statements and get Replace the word
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the conclusion.
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to
oil
, gas and coal are counted as regular consuming essentials on large
as well as normal scale. It would be like putting every task on pause without using them. Correct article usage
a large
For example
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country Saudi Add a hyphen
oil-rich
Arab
stops exporting its Correct your spelling
Arabia
oil
products like petrol and diesel to other countries it will be effective for both exporter and importer by a huge economical loss. People will not be able to use
their automobiles, big industries will stop working, it
will be so tough for the folks to do even their day to day activities. Correct word choice
and it
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whole world will be shut down. Moreover
, every natural resource has its own best property for which they are being used anormously
. Correct your spelling
enormously
anonymously
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example
it would be Add a comma
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foolishness
to compare Replace the word
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oil
and water or coal and solar energy as they have totally opposite specialities.
On other hand, There is not any doubt that natural resources
are being used very carelessely
which is leading to Correct your spelling
carelessly
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a spoil
spoil
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spoiling
atmosphere
. Add an article
the atmosphere
For instance
- forests are being cut down at high
level to Correct article usage
a high
accomodate
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accommodate
growing
population. Correct article usage
the growing
This
deed is harming other vital activities like animal habitation,lack of raining
, soil quality etc. Harmful gases are being released through big factories which Replace the word
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causing different illnesses like asthma, cancer, Change the verb form
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and depression to the public.
To summarise, In my Correct your spelling
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opinion
it is not possible to ignore the Add a comma
,opinion
use
of natural resources
completely but it is highly recommended to use
them carefully and wisely to prevent any big cause to current and forthcoming generation.Submitted by sandeep.sarba on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite