Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problem can lack of sleep cause? What can be done for lack of sleep?

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These days, several individuals are facing
problem
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in
geting
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getting
refreshing sleep. In
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essay we shall see issues related to sleep
defeciency
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deficiency
efficiency
, and what best can be done in order to prevent
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footfall. A good amount of sleep is necessary for every individual; reduced or disturbed sleep can cause
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of problems at various levels of mind, body and soul leading to
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on materialistic gain.
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issues
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illness
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.
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, less amount of rest can
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trigger
to mental
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irritability
, limiting
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focus
at work and overall can disturb
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balance. When all
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trouble enters life it can
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distort peace and harmony within and
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impact could be seen on
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. In order to prevent illness and stay
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healthy
healty
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it is significantly important to have refreshing mornings.
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to
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set
bed time
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routine, and start with yoga and meditative practices. Both
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this
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allow
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psyche
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the psyche
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and physic
stay
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away from disharmony.
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, avoiding
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movies, parties and screen staring can be a boon to improve
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of
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.
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, in
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today's
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world
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it is difficult to follow a
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when
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religiously
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it has
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outcome and can be blissful. To reiterate, in
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world one of the peak
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deliberating
celebrating
health
concern
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is lack of sleep.
Vicious
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cycle of health, and
mind sets
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in by causing
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a number
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of
illness
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, and stress.
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, it
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to
overcome
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by
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adapting
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solutions
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physical exercise, sleep routine and meditation.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Insomnia
  • Sleep deprivation
  • Sleep disorders
  • Sleep quality
  • Fatigue
  • Exhaustion
  • Restless
  • Restorative sleep
  • REM sleep
  • Circadian rhythm
  • Sleep hygiene
  • Napping
  • Sleep duration
  • Melatonin
  • Sleep-inducing
  • Drowsiness
  • Sleep disturbances
  • Obstructive sleep apnea
  • Snoring
  • Sleepwalking
  • Sleep talking
  • Shift work
  • Sleeping pills
  • Sleep aid
  • Relaxation techniques
  • Meditation
  • Deep breathing
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