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Memorization of information through repetition (rote learning) is an important part of most educational systems. Do the advantages of this method outweigh any limitations?

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most part of them would be forgotten after a short time.
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, some
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memorizing is waste of time.
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, the
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people
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 of the skills, but
people
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. In conclusion, while memorization of
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 to memorize more efficiently.

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